ufotofu9000's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snakey (1st cut)]

i dig it

could you make this into a screen saver?

saintbenzie responds:

I'll look into how to do it and get back to you. I'd actually like to make it into a screensaver.

[Jenny's love]

Complete Story (minus the interest)

For an animated short, you produced a fully coherent story that is simple to follow along with, which is much harder to do than it sounds so kudos.
Nothing particularly interesting going on, no tension/central conflict that absorbs the viewers' attention.
I liked the day/night effect you did with the sky while "David" is waiting for "jenny".
One more thing, don't use name labels with your characters in a cartoon short, especially when the main character's name is already in the title. It adds no meaningful frame of reference and just comes off as cheesy.
keep making more :)

Juantopo responds:

thanks for the tips. i know, i notest until i saw it complete that the name tags came off as unnesesary. but o hell, i did it for a friend under a script. (the friend's name is jenny)

ill keep up and progress in the work, im merely beggining

[the Apple Situation 2]

Bizzare but hilarious

I like your drawing style a lot, very erratic. This was a lot a fun to watch. Total Kudos.

SirReginald responds:

Thanks!