i dig it
could you make this into a screen saver?
I'll look into how to do it and get back to you. I'd actually like to make it into a screensaver.
It's good to know i'm not the only one.
I wish my father had told me how to get away after the booze and fat sex wears off...
that would have saved me a lot of unpleasant half-drunk conversations with naked fat women....
Complete Story (minus the interest)
For an animated short, you produced a fully coherent story that is simple to follow along with, which is much harder to do than it sounds so kudos.
Nothing particularly interesting going on, no tension/central conflict that absorbs the viewers' attention.
I liked the day/night effect you did with the sky while "David" is waiting for "jenny".
One more thing, don't use name labels with your characters in a cartoon short, especially when the main character's name is already in the title. It adds no meaningful frame of reference and just comes off as cheesy.
keep making more :)
thanks for the tips. i know, i notest until i saw it complete that the name tags came off as unnesesary. but o hell, i did it for a friend under a script. (the friend's name is jenny)
ill keep up and progress in the work, im merely beggining
This was genuinely fun to watch. A lot of different drawing ideas were obviously contributed to this flash, which kept it superbly entertaining despite it's PG material. A+ yo!
Bizzare but hilarious
I like your drawing style a lot, very erratic. This was a lot a fun to watch. Total Kudos.
Entertaining enough to watch. Could use more jokes.
kinda funny, mostly stupid
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